Do you like it? I sketched it out at school and then drew it on ms paint. Good for only my 2nd time? Please rate, thanks. The rock to the right of me is a granite shield btw.

nice tri 8) bethen mine :cry:

keep practicing, you'll get better eventually.

its ok, nothin specfial tho

ye its cool alots betta than my6 second ever but u need to make the face clearer

 

 

 

CC:

 

 

 

-Shade the background, don't draw random lines.

 

 

 

-More detail on the guy in the background, can't really see him

 

 

 

-More work on coloring, still see white spots on trees

 

 

 

-The way you're shading rocks seem...odd, where's your light source? From above?

 

 

 

-Stars look funky

 

 

 

-Linework should be more clean

 

 

 

-More shading on bones needed

 

 

 

-Ok now the main guy:

 

 

 

-Torsos are not triangular

 

 

 

-Needs more shading on his upper body, face, shoulderplates

 

 

 

-Legs too skinny for the guy

 

 

 

-Head too big

 

 

 

-Don't make left arm with a line tool

 

 

 

-The rock next to him is messy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But hey only your 2nd pixel, good for a 2nd :D

OK thanks. I cleared up the face, and the "rock" next to him is his granite shield that he sat down while waiting for someone to walk buy that he could slaughter.

ok. Major improvements now, like em?

Hey better, but a few things I just noticed hehe:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The light source should be from the moon, so the shading for the rocks, guy, and guy in the back is wrong. Actually did you shade the guy in the back? Hard to notice. Shade the trees. Text too simple. But the shield is much much better.