Hi,

 

i just made a new signature after getting a few brushes and reading a guide, i need some CC:

 

V1

 

 

 

 

V2

 

 

 

 

V3

 

 

 

 

if anyone could help me out,telling me good points and bad, with tips on how to improve.

 

 

 

this was a speed race with my mate, 9 mins 32 seconds =D

 

 

 

 

CC and Ratings please.

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

 

~Gudi

A little plain. Simple background with a render and text. You should really remove the (what looks like) blurred writting over the masterchief, and attempt to blend him in some other way, as it ruins the render. Also, the text should be rethought out, as it doesn't really suit.

 

 

 

Overall: 6/10 :P

 

 

 

Try some Tutorials on the programme you're using. :)

The render is very unclear, try rub out a few layers over top of that.

 

The text looks like its dissolved or something so i would fix up that.

 

Otherwise not too bad. :P

thanks for the tips.

 

 

 

its not blured writing over master cheif, and i dont even know where it came from :oops:

 

 

 

i didnt save it as .xcf so it was extremely hard to edit.

The text is pretty bad on first one, that needs some work.

 

Other than that its looks pretty good, but I can't tell a difference between v2 and v3 :uhh:

 

 

 

The render on the second sig is not blended very well. Bevel and emboss never works well :shame: .

 

But the background is pretty good.

 

 

 

 

 

Need more practice on texting, blending and maybe a some more work on backgrounds.

 

 

 

Practice makes perfect :anxious:

Well

 

 

 

V1:

 

 

 

-The BG doesnt match the render

 

-There is no blending, just the render under some layers, with brushing over it

 

- The Font does not fit

 

 

 

V2:

 

-Same as V1 really, no blending, to plain

 

 

 

V3:

 

- Stop adding that gray colour, and blend the render better, search Blending tutorials on google to find some

 

- change the BG to a greenish to match the render

 

- Bring the render to the top, and blend it

 

 

 

The speed race:

 

Looks alright

 

- blend the render instead of just lowering the opacity

 

- on the left side, there is that big blue spot, kinda The shape of a T, maybe split that up, it looks to crowded compared the the other side

 

 

 

Other than that, not too bad, though, TBH the top ones, need alot of work

 

 

 

Hope i could be of some help :)

 

 

 

- - - yaff2

Thanks for the tips.

 

 

 

im not too sure on blending, and i have been downloading quite a few new fonts.

 

 

 

il read up on backgrounds and blending, as navyplaya said, practice makes perfect.

 

 

 

~Gudi