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[bb_bart]

Lumbridge. IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m surrounded by people using bronze swords and shields of wood. I see a man

 

 

 

standing outside of a small shop. I ask him for some money. Angrily, he answers with a no, so I

 

 

 

steal his money with brute force. I stab my sword into his side, he falls to his knees, I pick his

 

 

 

pocket and leave him to rot. Across the river some of my friends are fighting small green goblins

 

 

 

wearing blue-shaded armor. I go over to them and quickly kill several goblins to prove to them

 

 

 

that I truly am the best. TheyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re amazed by my greatness. Because unlike them I have a large

 

 

 

sword made of iron. I challenge them both to fights. Scared, they back down from my challenge.

 

 

 

I kill many goblins massively improving my strength. I am strong but of low faith to the god

 

 

 

Guthix. Guthix is neither cruel nor kind, but more of a strict mentor. I shall work on that

 

 

 

tomorrow. For now, I must sleep. I step outside into the crimson morning sun. It beams into my

 

 

 

eyes momentarily cutting off my vision. Next thing I know my friends are standing to my left.

 

 

 

They want me to help them loot our enemy clans. I agree.We head far north to a desolate

 

 

 

wooded area, we all call it the wilderness because of all the wildlife living there. The wilderness is

 

 

 

dark and cold. In many areas quite desolate. It is the only place on the entire island that you can

 

 

 

kill people without getting caught. This is because of the lack of security in comparison to the

 

 

 

city. I see the enemy clan approaching from afar. I unleash my sword prepared for their clan to

 

 

 

besiege me and my friends. My friends take out their crossbows, these are special crossbows of

 

 

 

the Pheonix Gang since I have formed an alliance with them. Sure enough, the enemy attacked.

 

 

 

The first of the warriors who came after me was taken at the edge of my blade. I took all that he

 

 

 

possessed, money, food, armor and weapons. My friends were in trouble. They couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t load

 

 

 

their bows in close combat. They barely got away from the enemies leader, who I quickly moved

 

 

 

in for the kill on. I took down the leader with both of my friends firing crossbow bolts from aside

 

 

 

me. Once their leader had been taken at my blade, as with many others, the entire clan fled.

 

 

 

Three men had taken down an army of eight. Although unheard of, it had happened. The enemy

 

 

 

had fallen to my blade. The enemy was a powerful, well-known clan, and yet me and my two best

 

 

 

friends had single handedly defeated them. Once again, as the moon rose over the trees of the

 

 

 

woods I knew it was time to sleep. We noticed small rats scurrying about in the bushes. My

 

 

 

friend launched an arrow at one of them. Crack! The rat was stuck to a fencepost. My other

 

 

 

friend explained to us as we were walking home that shooting rats with bolts, arrows and magic

 

 

 

would be a quick and easy way to get better at our skills. We all lacked magic and thought we

 

 

 

should improve it. I told my friends that I needed to salute Guthix. They accepted that. At home

 

 

 

mother had dinner waiting. It was cold. She rushed me to my room got me into pajamas and

 

 

 

threw me into my bed. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhat were you doing all day?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

[sirith_knight]

YukkyDins, I really wish you would stop posting here. I see about 15 comments that all say "Boring, I didn't read more than the first 3 words, it sucked." Do not comment on someones story unless you read it, and don't tell everyone their stories are boring when their quality is far higher than that of your own "stories"

 

 

 

Anyway... I thought it was pretty good. Seemed to have a poetic feel to it. A bit hard to read cause there was no paragraphs. Maybe each sentence should have its own line... i dunno. I did like the style of the story and would read something else written the same way, as long as you promise me to use paragraphs :twisted:

[Death45]

Pretty good though what's with all the spaces?