September 20, 200718 yr Yay, a non-Runescape related story! I wrote this a while ago, it's a stand-alone short story that I did on my free time. I guess I would call it a thriller/mystery, but we'll see what you all think of it. ---------------------------- It was widely agreed upon by the long-term residents and therefore self appointed and esteemed wise of the town that the newly moved in, middle-aged, emaciated man with grey eyes so light as to appear almost colorless and a vacant expression was, in their very articulate and profound words, creepy. The strange man had slunk into town with what was considered a rather shady demeanor and unceremoniously filled in the vacant flat that had been up for sale for as long as the town ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬Åwise onesÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
September 21, 200718 yr :shock: Beautiful...... Eleven kittens out of ten....... Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
September 21, 200718 yr :shock: Beautiful...... Eleven kittens out of ten....... One thing that strikes me is the kittens thing...You remind me of my friend, obsessed with cats. Truth--it's annoying. But I get what you're saying, just saying what I keep seeing...No offense. As for your story, amazing work, Nom. I expect more. =D> Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want)
September 21, 200718 yr Author Thanks for the comments, guys. I think I'll leave this on its own for a while, at least until more people read it. Then I'll look into doing something new.
September 21, 200718 yr Very nice! :D I didn't know that you had that kind of vocabulary...or did you just make up those big words???? :wink: Last.Fm My Bloggy Proud to have served on Tip.it Crew
September 21, 200718 yr Author Very nice! :D I didn't know that you had that kind of vocabulary...or did you just make up those big words???? :wink: Well, you've never taken the time to read anything I've written before now :wink:.
September 24, 200718 yr Amazing work. You are one of the best authors in this library. It's an incredible story with a creepy plot and it leaves me wondering about the man. I have decided to use a form of counting as well: souls. It has to be at least 11 souls out of the usual 10. You're great. You have no idea how powerful words are....until they hit you in the head.
September 24, 200718 yr Author Haha, inflate my ego, would you? :P . Seriously, thanks. Glad you like it.
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