October 7, 200718 yr [hide=V1][/hide] [hide=V2, rework][/hide] [hide=V2.1, lightened the blur on his kick][/hide] Well I've had an attempt at a sprite signature, the first one I've ever made. I know you're not advised to post something you're not happy with, but I need some help. I know it's flawed and not reaching its potential. Therefore I need some heavy criticism and suggestions by people who know what they're talking about and can help me improve it. V2.1 up, suggestions? Much love.
October 7, 200718 yr It is very cloudy around the render, and for the force of the kick, perhaps sitck some effect c4ds? Colours don't match, flow lines are a bit strange. Maybe from the sprite sheet, get the effects and set them on linear dodge etc. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
October 7, 200718 yr its WAY to small. the flow is nice, but i think you should add somthing to make it look like his kick is powerful, something like fire, or light, something like that maybe instead of red, something like a pink. because the red doesnt go to well with the sprite i like it though. i dont know much about these types of sigs, but it looks nice 8/10 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
October 7, 200718 yr New version up, what do you think? something like that, but why is it brown? 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
October 8, 200718 yr Hmm, whell, I' d suggest a shockwave at the end of his foot, maybe it will look better. But overall it' s 9/10 =D> RSN:Mico1311 Combat: 82 Highest skill: Fishing 75 Playing time: From around August 2003 The guy in my avatar is Veso, a comedian mastermind.
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