this is my first pixel i ever made so dont be to rude on me so 1/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://tinypic.com/2ijfqv

how strange image files are usually .gif or .bmp or .png i see nothing of that here...

 

 

 

might be key logged

i uploaded it with tinypic.com and than it isnt a picture anymore but just a link

 

 

 

an the

upload it via http://www.imageshack.us

is this better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yes

its ok. its to big for these forums and the shadows are wacky.

the shading/drawing on some parts are nice, but others are horible. I.E i love the shortbow and the trees (could be bigger, but characters are huge) but i hate the characters, the ground, the spell, and the walls.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So.. it looks like half good/ half ew. Good job i guess for a first though. keep at it :)

The shadows are pointing in opposite directions, and if the source of light was from the viewer (like how you would shade by pillow shading), they would all be behind the object to like the north (if where the person looking at it is south)

Actually the shadows are correct, as the lighting is the fire blast. So that means the light would spread out in all directions and things would get darker the farther away they were, so the lighting is somewhat correct.

Actually the shadows are correct, as the lighting is the fire blast. So that means the light would spread out in all directions and things would get darker the farther away they were, so the lighting is somewhat correct.

 

 

 

yup the light source is in the center so all the shadows should be opposite but, i dont like like it sorry. use more colors in shading and remodel the char.

well...... even though the light source is in the center, the shadows still arent correct, the ranger and the 2 tree shadows are wrong, the rangers shadow should be more at the angle that the tree above him is, the tree above the ranger should have a shadow thats more at the angle of the ranger's, and the left tree's shadow should be at an angle in between where it is now and the angle of the sword's

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also the spell does look kinda strange/bad

 

 

 

and the trees are small

 

 

 

and one side of the sword should be darker than the other b/c of shadow

 

 

 

and there should be bricks in the walls

 

 

 

and the arrow heads are too small

 

 

 

and put a shiny spot on the orb

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and use a different program to put the text on,

 

 

 

putting text on with just plain paint tends to look like you havent put time into it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well... i think thats all

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but i do think that you did a good job over all, its obvious that youve got talent, but there is always room to improve for everyone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and since the dimensions are too big you will probly end up doing the whole thing over, the biggest it can be is 150 tall and 300 wide