Looking for C|C on the structure or Anatomy of the simple lineart. Preferably from someone knowledgeable in the area. This has taken me quite a while (it's a lot harder with a mouse :wink: ) to get it to look semi-correct.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know people like Wyrm and Kiephus can help me a lil' bit here :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TY LOTS! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-ZIM

ok looks good but his body is twisted oddly at the hips

I think that the left calf (his right) is a bit of a steep angle as you move up the leg. Maybe not, it's kind of hard to judge the angle without some tiny facial feature. And if it is a side or back view of the torso, you might make some short lines to show his shoulder blades, but i don't know how detailed you want to get, and what the girth and body structure of the person you are creating is supposed to be. Besides that, great job on the pose, and the whip hand is perfect. The forearm, too, is very well done. Good job for freehand.

nice. the torso is a tad small however.

the knee caps should be sticking out a bit. and the lower half of the legs should be slightly behind the thights so that if the person is standing up straight, the thighs and the forelegs do not form a straight line (its kinda hard to explain without making instructive drawings :? ).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

he is also missing a butt. heheh.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit: torso is fine, but the arms are too long imo.

i think quer_skull is best at anatomy

i think quer_skull is best at anatomy

 

 

 

yes i would have to agree... quer is the man at that