mixand Posted October 23, 2007 Share Posted October 23, 2007 [hide=Older versions] [/hide] Kinda hard to figure out what to put in it :) (i like making bases in red alert etc :P) "If ye love wealth better than liberty, the tranquility of servitude better than the animating contest of freedom, go home from us in peace. We ask not your counsels or your arms. Crouch down and lick the hands which feed you. May your chains set lightly upon you, and may posterity forget that you were our countrymen." - Samuel AdamsMy new site. [bETA] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted October 23, 2007 Share Posted October 23, 2007 Not really that much to comment on yet, because of the big white space. But looking good so far. :) pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Etta Posted October 23, 2007 Share Posted October 23, 2007 Good work so far - keep it up and fill that ugly white space! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syd Posted October 24, 2007 Share Posted October 24, 2007 Nice amount of detail there, keep it up. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M_u_s_ii_X Posted October 24, 2007 Share Posted October 24, 2007 Ha! I love the tank : ⅹ Last.fm YouTube Team A vs Team B M u s ii X Rocky Keane ⅹ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted October 24, 2007 Share Posted October 24, 2007 Me likey! Eight kittens out of ten! But the outline on the tanks needs to be just a bit darker were the one tank touches the other.. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exbaj Posted October 25, 2007 Share Posted October 25, 2007 I think you could fix up the corners of the towers abit more, diagonal bits don't even seem to hit the right points on them. The tree's leaves could be darker, as with the tanks, or atleast show the difference in distance and maybe allow them to show abit of angle as well. As for the battle ground I suppose it is, then allow some mayham (Not sure how to spell atm) but yeah allow some action in between, to show there is warfare happening, someone being shot, someone getting ready to shoot. The actual characteristics between everything need to show more, because at this moment in time it just seems like some tanks rolling back into camp, if this is happening, then it's not the most interesting plot, but otherwise you can work on fixing up the colour's on everything, make it more realistic, and yeah. That's all my advice for now. 99 / 99 Mining 89 / 99 Smithing 87 / 90 Strength SKILL TOTAL: 1836 / 2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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