i tryed to make it look a little bit like the barrens from world of warcraft since a person in my clan wants a sig of one. it took awhile to make the painted rocks. the rocks looked smooth so i had to put a shadow on them to make them look more rough. i couldnt find another good color for the ground but im sure ill do better next time. its good to say i improved

i'll give it a 10/10 because i love and play WoW :P but if i didnt know what it was i would probly give it 5/10 cause landscape r easy :P unless you do it like nad lol or some other good peeps :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and the sky is too plain and too light?... or somthing its just looks diffrent to the barrens...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s GO ALLIANCE!

hmm... i can say i like your atempt at the surface map. Notice, i said "atempt" there are still many problems.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First off, the grass is very...eww. If you were doing a desert type place, don't put grass in, and don't put in yellowish grass. Just sand or a sandy rock type of thing would work out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, usualy that kind of texture on the rocks doesn't go on mountains like that. It's found on canyons and such, and its also usualy on larger objects. This one is quite small, and up close.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, the scene is very barren. You should be able to see at least some mountains in the far off distance (with that thing that small, you should see more). Also, the sky is kind of ... plain. Infact, its just the deffault. And trust me, the default doesn't look good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So with that all said, it has alot of problems. I do admire your effort though to get the rock like formation correct, (even if it isn't on the right kind of structure) because textures like that usualy take a little bit of time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck in the future.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Nadril

i'll give it a 10/10 because i love and play WoW :P but if i didnt know what it was i would probly give it 5/10 cause landscape r easy :P unless you do it like nad lol or some other good peeps :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and the sky is too plain and too light?... or somthing its just looks diffrent to the barrens...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s GO ALLIANCE!

i fall within the horde/undead/magi class. i spent alot of time trying to get the paintlines on there.

 

i'll give it a 10/10 because i love and play WoW :P but if i didnt know what it was i would probly give it 5/10 cause landscape r easy :P unless you do it like nad lol or some other good peeps :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and the sky is too plain and too light?... or somthing its just looks diffrent to the barrens...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s GO ALLIANCE!

i fall within the horde/undead/magi class. i spent alot of time trying to get the paintlines on there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for not even acknowladging my C&C. oh well...

I had a stab at adjusting the contrast and color.

 

 

 

http://img215.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img215& ... ain4js.png

 

 

 

(Better resolution but it won't work in IMG tags for me. :?)

I had a stab at adjusting the contrast and color.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks better adam :) Covers up some of the problems in it. Would be great now if it was an actual canyon. :)

yeai just wanted to fool around with the stupid slopes and such so it looks like i made a minor discovery for me. nadril i am wrong to ignore you, i am sorry sensae! please forgive me!! yea that does look alot better! sweetness.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw nadril i didnt face you in cs:s yet.

yeai just wanted to fool around with the stupid slopes and such so it looks like i made a minor discovery for me. nadril i am wrong to ignore you, i am sorry sensae! please forgive me!! yea that does look alot better! sweetness.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw nadril i didnt face you in cs:s yet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats alright. I was just hoping that i didn't waste my time writing that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and i can play you now in cs:s if you want. pm me an IP adress. :)

um.. do you like assault lith?