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this one started yesterday right after school, finished this morning, about 4-5 hours on it i think. Its my first pen tool vector (the other guy was doesn't count :P, it was short and small) so it was a cool. Anyway tips and comments greatly appreciated. Go easy on me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: changed linkg

make the finger in her mouth a little smaller and more female like lol

/bump/update u can view the pic now

lol its nice but the womans face umm its pretty ugly lol make it more u know pretty lol.

I'm guessing you traced a stock?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe try something besides a chick. Unless you have some specific use for a vectored woman, do something more interesting. Everyone does women. It's lame.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for this one, though, looks good, mostly. The hair could be smoothed a lot, though.

hate to be mean but she is ugly.. and she looks like she's biting her finger off.. also, try to give things a more real tone and feeling, it looks too smoothd out and monotoneish...

yea she wasn't the prettiest girl, but a stock is a stock you can't really get any good ones from what i have seen. It wasn't actually made to exploit beautiful women (sorry for using the harsh word exploit, couldn't think of anything less serious). But i guess your right GSW, women are overused. You win, you always do.

yea she wasn't the prettiest girl, but a stock is a stock you can't really get any good ones from what i have seen. It wasn't actually made to exploit beautiful women (sorry for using the harsh word exploit, couldn't think of anything less serious). But i guess your right GSW, women are overused. You win, you always do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wasn't saying it was neccesarily exploiting women..just that using that kind of a stock for this style had been done so many times..

 

yea she wasn't the prettiest girl, but a stock is a stock you can't really get any good ones from what i have seen. It wasn't actually made to exploit beautiful women (sorry for using the harsh word exploit, couldn't think of anything less serious). But i guess your right GSW, women are overused. You win, you always do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wasn't saying it was neccesarily exploiting women..just that using that kind of a stock for this style had been done so many times..

 

 

 

yes thats why i ageed with u.

Could use some contrast....

I think that the picture is great...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think there might need to be a bit shading in the face....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like how you did the hair... it looks good and also the pants look amazing...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do you remember Vlad from the early days?

yes pants are great, hair i dont like needs more colors and strands

yea i will try to improve, like i said me kinda new to that, so i suck. But i will make another one when i get the chance, hopefully better. Tips are greatly appreciated.