December 6, 200718 yr Nice! I think the light in the top draws the focus too much away from the singer and into the empty space. Maybe putting it behind the microphone would be good? Also, the render could possibly use a little more blending. Great work! Being immature is a part of being mature.
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December 7, 200718 yr The focal point seems kind of boring, just going from the top left to the bottom right. It's not bad, just kind of boring.
December 7, 200718 yr nice you are becoming better How does 20 minutes turn into 2.5 hours? Was your math perhaps magical math?
December 7, 200718 yr The focal point seems kind of boring, just going from the top left to the bottom right. It's not bad, just kind of boring. agreed, and the stock needs to be blended a tad bit more 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
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