zeron Posted May 4, 2005 Share Posted May 4, 2005 ALOT of work was put into this, so i decided to post it. tell me what you think, and what i could change. the original sig was made in MSN Paint, and then i added text and border in photoshop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted May 4, 2005 Share Posted May 4, 2005 Awesome job on the background and the characters head, spectacular job their. But your characters body is out of proportion and work on your characters shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted May 4, 2005 Share Posted May 4, 2005 Liking the hair!! anyway, like teen said, body's are a bit mis-formed (big shoes..) and such, a tip it to try and make your shading just noticeable enough to make a difference but doesnt stand out (dont go from dark to light quickly) also add a mouth :) axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeron Posted May 4, 2005 Author Share Posted May 4, 2005 thx for the CC i appreciate it alot, i'm gonna work on the sig a bit more, but i'm gonna skate first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted May 5, 2005 Share Posted May 5, 2005 cool. finaly the usage of claws! 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johan15 Posted May 5, 2005 Share Posted May 5, 2005 Awesome job on the background and the characters head, spectacular job their. But your characters body is out of proportion and work on your characters shading. WOW your sig is awesome sorry back on topic pretty nice for the first sig, if i'd do it it would look like a 3 yr old trying to draw something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted May 5, 2005 Share Posted May 5, 2005 i like it but i have to point out a few things. -your usage of spray can is noticeable -the shading doesnt blend very well -the body is out of proportion -the hair is good - the person sitting on the tree looks like a little kid - the little kids pants and body is out of proportion also. -overall it is blan.. lacks alot of detail Detail: The little things which make something seem more pleasent when viewed. Just add some like debri on the ground or a house or something a caslte maybe? and probly throw something in the background. but it is good for a first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheeseplate Posted May 6, 2005 Share Posted May 6, 2005 I like it a lot, extremly good for your first pixel. Give it a mouth though and with the shading on the charcter's body, add in more colours so it's less noticable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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