ALOT of work was put into this, so i decided to post it. tell me what you think, and what i could change. the original sig was made in MSN Paint, and then i added text and border in photoshop.

 

 

 

Awesome job on the background and the characters head, spectacular job their. But your characters body is out of proportion and work on your characters shading.

Liking the hair!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, like teen said, body's are a bit mis-formed (big shoes..) and such, a tip it to try and make your shading just noticeable enough to make a difference but doesnt stand out (dont go from dark to light quickly)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also add a mouth :)

thx for the CC i appreciate it alot, i'm gonna work on the sig a bit more, but i'm gonna skate first.

cool. finaly the usage of claws!

Awesome job on the background and the characters head, spectacular job their. But your characters body is out of proportion and work on your characters shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WOW your sig is awesome

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry back on topic

 

 

 

pretty nice for the first sig, if i'd do it it would look like a 3 yr old trying to draw something

i like it but i have to point out a few things.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-your usage of spray can is noticeable

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-the shading doesnt blend very well

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-the body is out of proportion

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-the hair is good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- the person sitting on the tree looks like a little kid

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- the little kids pants and body is out of proportion also.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-overall it is blan.. lacks alot of detail

 

 

 

Detail: The little things which make something seem more pleasent when viewed.

 

 

 

Just add some like debri on the ground or a house or something a caslte maybe? and probly throw something in the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but it is good for a first

I like it a lot, extremly good for your first pixel.

 

 

 

Give it a mouth though and with the shading on the charcter's body, add in more colours so it's less noticable.