Well it's the third pixel I've done so I know its not that great, but please rate it out of 10...

Well as the walls are plain you can either add a lot more texture or change the atmosphere of the sig, id guess that theres no light source inside so you should have everywhere darker away from the window to almost black.. Below the sword/above the name, you might wanna add something else. And when adding shading to the sword try and hint the shape cus it looks a bit flat.. Try using different greens and blues for outide cus it looks too cartoony, bold.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well I like the whole idea of it, keep improving it cus if you take the advice youll be suprised with what you can really do..

Well I'm not too good at pixel sigs according to Teenageloser :roll: but I'll give some critique anyway.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First of all since its sort of a plain indoor scene so you want to really concentrate on perspective and in this sig the perspective is off slightly. The floor shouldnt go straight down it should have sort of an angle to it. and just look around an make sure it looks 3d.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also in the window, the hill is just plain, look around outside, what do you see? Houses, lots of trees, (unless you live in the city but w/e) or maybe some paths, use your imagination add something interesting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

k, now you want to make your sig kinda have a story or theme of some sort, just maybe add something to catch the audience's eye not just a blank room with a sword (you're not entangle :lol: )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

o and terley is very correct in all the shading aspects, but shading alone wont help you sell sigs. :wink:

1/10.....you seem to know the basic fundamentals of 1st grade geometry. You can actually draw shapes right! And you display a simple understanding of shading. Besides that ur pixellin is incompetent and i believe a rabid monkey could do better than that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: Ice.....your goin down Monday at skool sucka :twisted:

and you are much better?! get a life you stupid pixel wannabe!

 

 

 

kidding, man...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dont listen to him man, continue pixelling and one day probably tomorrow you will be better than him!

hmmmmm i really think i will stop trying pixeling cuz i really tried hard and if a rabid monkey can do better, then maybe sig making isnt my thing...

hmmmmm i really think i will stop trying pixeling cuz i really tried hard and if a rabid monkey can do better, then maybe sig making isnt my thing...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! dont listen to him. just keep going, hate to use these sayings but Rome Wasnt Built in a Day.

hmmmmm i really think i will stop trying pixeling cuz i really tried hard and if a rabid monkey can do better, then maybe sig making isnt my thing...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe it isnt.....but hey....everyone has their thing...jus keep searching for yours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Or you could jus work on pixels and not post em until they actually look halfway decent :roll:

There, I updated it with some of your suggestions and I think it looks at least halfway decent now :)

There, I updated it with some of your suggestions and I think it looks at least halfway decent now :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

much better with the floor perspective but dont just go off the examples I gave, the table is off some.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the window looks pretty good, just add some detail and shading and you are on your way.

 

There, I updated it with some of your suggestions and I think it looks at least halfway decent now :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

much better with the floor perspective but dont just go off the examples I gave, the table is off some.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the window looks pretty good, just add some detail and shading and you are on your way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is wrong with the table exactly?

 

 

There, I updated it with some of your suggestions and I think it looks at least halfway decent now :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

much better with the floor perspective but dont just go off the examples I gave, the table is off some.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the window looks pretty good, just add some detail and shading and you are on your way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is wrong with the table exactly?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The legs are turned weird while the top is straight. just think perspective :wink: