June 12, 200818 yr well if you missed my old topic about it, This is the newest thing i have done... i think im going to leave it as is, as it is starting to look very busy on the things i want to focus on. What do you think? what can i improve on? anything is welcome. Final 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
June 12, 200818 yr The mask is a lot better now (Obviously the blood splatter). I don't like the colour of the blood of the saw nor the bullet hole on the forehead, looks unrealistic compared to the mask. I suggest more blood for the forehead and not as many black dots. For the saw, The majority of small blades are still "clean" even though the saw is pretty bloody, make them "bloody' and I think it'll turn out pretty nicely. I hope you'll continue on this one ;).
June 12, 200818 yr Author ill see what i can do, next time i open ps though :P 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
June 13, 200818 yr The mask is a lot better now (Obviously the blood splatter). I don't like the colour of the blood of the saw nor the bullet hole on the forehead, looks unrealistic compared to the mask. I suggest more blood for the forehead and not as many black dots. For the saw, The majority of small blades are still "clean" even though the saw is pretty bloody, make them "bloody' and I think it'll turn out pretty nicely. I hope you'll continue on this one ;). Agreed, I also think the bullet hole could use some work. The black coming from it looks a bit strange. Other than that, it certainly isn't a bad piece, but not my favourite from you either. pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 13, 200818 yr The bullet hole has a red circle in the middle of it. Unless that is my eyes tricking me. Needs work, as everyone else said. Not a fan of this piece, but, it is, in general, well done. |Signature by Jason321|
June 13, 200818 yr The bullet hole has a red circle in the middle of it. Unless that is my eyes tricking me. It isn't, I can see it too. pixel avvy by me deviantART
June 14, 200818 yr Apart from not being a big fan of violent type things like this, I don't really like it. The whole piece lacks a certain realism to it. The bullet hole in his head looks not that great, try cleaning that up, but th blood is improved from last time i saw this.
June 14, 200818 yr Apart from not being a big fan of violent type things like this, I don't really like it. The whole piece lacks a certain realism to it. The bullet hole in his head looks not that great, try cleaning that up, but th blood is improved from last time i saw this. I think it's a woman :?.
June 14, 200818 yr Another thing... How is there blood on the saw, and on her face, but no wear on her clothes? Unless she liked to get really close with her pace to the person she is cutting, or wears an apron. :P |Signature by Jason321|
June 14, 200818 yr Author Another thing... How is there blood on the saw, and on her face, but no wear on her clothes? Unless she liked to get really close with her pace to the person she is cutting, or wears an apron. :P i meant to keep it like that, i didnt think it would look all great with to much blood. wanted to keep it like that. 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
June 14, 200818 yr Alright. I could see how it would be a bit much. Realistically, it should be there, but, we aren't being really realistic here, are we? :) |Signature by Jason321|
June 15, 200818 yr Author not at all :lol: 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
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