AndyPandy Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Hey guys, I just did my entry for SOTW, and this is it: How do you guys think I could improve, also, ratings would be helpful. I'm not sure about the wings, overlaid over the top, what do you think? EDIT: without wings: EDIT: Added more effects and made text a whole lot easier to read. ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 *Cough* you might want to do something different xD, check out the entries. Pretty decent, I don't like the low opacity wings. Also your acting like Chaz, a lot of black empty space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted June 20, 2008 Author Share Posted June 20, 2008 Oh man, I din't see someone already used that. :cry: . Oh well, two of the same makes for easier comparison, right :? ? I'm gonna keep it there, I'm too tired to make another. ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaphias Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 You put text on there to be read, correct? Please, make it so that I don't have to spend 10 seconds deciphering it... 8,325th to 99 Firemaking 3/9/08 | 44,811th to 99 Cooking 7/16/084,968th to 99 Farming 10/9/09 | Runescaper August 2005-March 2010Tip.it Mod Feb. 2008-Sep. 2008 | Tip.it Crew Sep. 2008-Nov. 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 The version without the wings looks a lot better IMO. It's a decent signature, a bit too much empty black space, but I suppose it works here. The text is a problem though, it really doesn't fit, is hard to read and quite distracting too. I wouldn't really know what to do with it instead, but as it is now it just doesn't seem to work. Not my all-time favourite from you, but it's decent. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 what did you do? All I see is a plain, centered image , maybe like 3 brushes total and some text that is ungodly difficult to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted June 21, 2008 Author Share Posted June 21, 2008 Another version up. ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 Text is still hard, still a bit empty and I did this render first *facepalm* So far so good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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