Here is the new pikachu signature I made, I don't know how long it took me but I did take my time on this one ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mithril26

Looks alright, but the text is really bad.

Any tips on how you would fix it?

The text is a bit too big and distracting I think. The background is ok, but seems to lack flow and is quite messy because of all the C4Ds. Don't be afraid to erase some bad parts with a big soft brush. Also, the render seems distorted, probably because there is a filter on top of it.

 

 

 

Keep it up though, you're improving.

Thanks man ;)

Jopie is a girl. (Or maybe you're just using it as "that" expression). Anyways, well done on the signature. Definitely a huge improvement. A bit messy with the C4D's, but it's still not bad. As Jopie said, the text is quite awful. Make the size smaller. Text can also be used to add flow or go with flow. In this case there is no "real" flow. And if all else fails, just go with a simple Arial font.

 

 

 

Also, what program are you using? GIMP or PhotoShop?

 

 

 

Keep practicing :

Thanks ;) and I'm using photoshop...

the render itself is pretty messy maybe change the blending

I messed with the render alot, I really don't remember how many times I duplicated it and messed with settings but I do see what you mean :D