July 25, 200817 yr Commented on these over msn. I love your new one though. I really like the way you incorporated everything. good work!
July 26, 200817 yr Author Thank you both very much : http://jason321.deviantart.com/art/Mysp ... t-92807686 Enjoy? Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
July 26, 200817 yr Author New signature. Completely different style! http://jason321.deviantart.com/art/Samu ... e-92828108 Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
July 26, 200817 yr Don't like it to be perfectly honest, too messy. The wireframes aren't really used well, and the render is a bit blurry. I used that render. :-# danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
July 26, 200817 yr Author Are you implying that because you used that render, I can't? :P Other Version Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
July 26, 200817 yr Are you implying that because you used that render, I can't? :P Other Version No, I was just saying it was a hard rende to work with, if you get my drift. New version is somewhat better. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
July 26, 200817 yr Author I was only kidding :P Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
July 26, 200817 yr Wire framers are indeed weird, looks like you rotated it several times which makes it distorted, same for C4Ds on some of your older signatures, It's not bad but it's not very good either, keep practicing and you'll eventually master it :thumbup:.
July 28, 200817 yr Author New Large Piece! [hide=Wolf LP][/hide] Click for link to deviantart. As always, comment here and there, please. Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
August 2, 200817 yr Author Thanks for all the posts :( Did another LP A touch of Scenery [hide=A touch of Scenery][/hide] Comment here and there, please. Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
August 2, 200817 yr The wolf LP is quite "cool" :thumbup:, nice black and white feel to it and the concept is alright. The clouds fit, maybe the middle one could be slightly smaller as it looks like it's closer to the ground. The stars are nice maybe a bit too star like though, they're just round and shiny in real life, looks nice nevertheless. The tree without leaves looks great, looks like it's popping out of the grass, the pinetree on the other hand looks like it's titled forward and pops up behind the grass which gives me a feeling like it's hovering above the ground a bit. The moon is what puts me off, it just pops up there and steals all the attention of the piece, I would rework it and try to blend it to the background a bit like letting the cloud go over it, making it a little grayer and so on. The "A touch scenery" LP have a nice and cartoony feel , can't say much about it except that it needs shading and the rainbow goes really low unless it's far away those hills, same for the clouds. The hills feel a little too round and I see you tried some simple shading here (I want it on zhe clouds as well ), middle hill bothers me a bit though as you changed the shading there. If you plan on adding something on it I suggest cartoony animals liek penguins and cows Sorry I didn't reply earlier, I looked at the wolf piece a while ago and was thinking of commenting it later, apparently I forgot.
August 2, 200817 yr Author Thanks for the C/C but I don't think I'm gunna change either of those pieces :P Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
August 2, 200817 yr Author Um, what? I just can't be bothered ATM :P Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
August 2, 200817 yr Author Sorry for double post. http://jason321.deviantart.com/art/A-to ... I-93556429 I'll update the Wolf LP as well soon. EDIT: http://jason321.deviantart.com/art/Howl ... I-93557177 Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
August 2, 200817 yr The moon is still quite distracting but it's better (Clouds over zhe moon plawks). Exchanging the pinetree for the "long grass" (Forgot the word) was also a good addition, just have one thing that I think could be changed on that one. The normal grass are leaning to the right while the "long grass" leans at all directions, looks like the wind only affects the normal grass and not the "long grass". It's a lot better now in my opinion, still a bit "meh" about the moon though. The update on "A touch scenery" is also better but got a couple of flaws in them in my opinion. The rainbow is really narrow at the end, maybe you did it on purpose to give it a effect like it's far away at that point but then the other end would be a lot wider. Clouds look better with shading :thumbup:. The top hill feels a bit tall, if you lowered it a bit and the rainbow it could look better but that's just my opinion. Overall it's a good improvement :thumbup:.
August 3, 200817 yr Author First of all, thanks for the C/C. And secondly, thanks for the compliments. Meh, at the grass :P The rainbow actually was deliberate, believe it or not. Overall, thanks. Avatar by Unoalexi :: Signature by Skull_Emblem Illumination Graphics :: Click here to download the BeyondGFX resource pack!
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