I know that it needs alot, I think at least it's going SOMEHWHERE in the right direction. CC please. And if you don't have anything constructive to say, *please* don't waste my time. (HINT: Try to give CC like Nadril.)

hmm wat is the topic of the sig?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if magic, maybe put a magic hat on?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but i think u have nice work on the hair..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i am not a good sig maker so i can't give you too much comments..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but hope to see the final version soon :)

Hmm... I'd try a bit more "zoomed out" pixel. I'm not sure, but getting details that are big like that can be hard to do. Try and perhaps do a size of characters like in a lot of other scenes, so you can have a character shown out more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As far as the pixeling goes, it looks more like a paint drawing then a pixel. As a sugestion, I would try and get your linework all done and nice, and then start the pixelating :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck.

Thanks for the advice Nadril. The thing is, except for the mouth (which I used a circle tool) the entire thing was drawn with the Pencil tool. I knew something was messed up, and I think it is the "paint drawing" look. I'll see what I can do to fix it.

Thanks for the advice Nadril. The thing is, except for the mouth (which I used a circle tool) the entire thing was drawn with the Pencil tool. I knew something was messed up, and I think it is the "paint drawing" look. I'll see what I can do to fix it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, usualy when you get an up-close look like that it tends to look paint-ish. the lack of shading as of now (since it is an unfinished state) also could be contributing to it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So i would say make the character(s) smaller, you can also make more of a scene that way :)