July 22, 200817 yr This is a new piece by me. I'm not too sure of it, but I really like it. I called it "Electric". Basically, if you have seen my piece "Abstract Bombing" (link here: http://mrshinyredplanet.deviantart.com/ ... g-91680749) you might think it was a one off. Well, I tried very herd to re-create that kind of sense in it. It turned out as a Abstract-Grunge crossover IMO. Tell me what you think needs improving etc etc... Thanks Shiny
July 22, 200817 yr The let down that makes itself apparent immediately is the text IMO. It doesn't suit with the image at all, so lets down the whole piece. The border also doesn't look like it goes with the main image either. The central piece is really good, with the exception of the random black blurs. I would have had more of a focus point within the piece aswell. [/c/c] :P ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous
July 22, 200817 yr the buttom left suppose to be blurry? Don't you know the first rule of MMO's? Anyone higher level than you has no life, and anyone lower than you is a noob. People in OT eat glass when they are bored.
July 23, 200817 yr ^ I'm pretty sure it is. Agreed with Rainy here, it would look a lot better without the text and border IMO. Also, I think the main image is just to chaotic, get rid of some of the brushes I'd say. pixel avvy by me deviantART
July 23, 200817 yr I agree with most of Rainys points there, also the green spot isn't very good looking, try some deep red there instead?
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