well its only a char and no shading done (hopefully thats just temporarily), but for my first, i think its pretty good

 

 

 

(ps:i know the shoes stink)

 

 

 

 

 

 

cc plz

no1 wants to reply?? :cry: :cry: :cry:

The lineart is OK. However, shading is needed, it isn't really more than a drawing until you add shading. Good work and good luck.

interesting character. i like the idea and concept.

 

 

 

tips:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. the whole body doesn't look quite right, but pretty good for a first attempt. compare it with another body to see how you can improve on it.

 

 

 

2. the muscle lines doesn't really look like muscles, more like he's been put together piece by piece, like a jigsaw puzzle.

 

 

 

3. you've made the upper body muscular, but the bottom doesn't work with it. maybe place some wrinkles on the pants a bit.

 

 

 

4. yes the shoes need work. :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not bad though, keep going. create a background for him. keep it up.

thx jervi for the cc

 

 

 

im trying to learn how to shade, so he wont be shaded for a while unless some1 does it for me (hint hint :D)

 

 

 

i added gloves to this 1:

 

 

 

 

 

 

i can do better shoes, but it was too late cuz of reasons i dont feel like explaining

 

 

 

[edit]i lightened up the muscle lines a bit, hopefully making him look more natural[/edit]