123Yourgone Posted June 9, 2005 Share Posted June 9, 2005 Crimson Angel As I lie here waiting for death, working my lungs to catch my breath, I see you now , blood in my eyes, broken and dazed. My crimson angel shines through the haze, won't you take me.. take me away. Maybe this night I can drop my facade leave this mask and bear my shame, come to me angel share this pain, so much to give so little to gain, forgiveness perhaps? Salvation is near, death is upon me, I have no fear. ~Matthew Witt~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acidcantdie Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 Nice 7/10 i like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeeKeeper0 Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 cool, 7/10 The name's Bee Keeper0 not BeeKeeper0! Boom chi boom boom chi boom boom chi boom boom chi... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbl3z Posted June 11, 2005 Share Posted June 11, 2005 hi runit3 :D remember me? nice poem ya got there 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted June 22, 2005 Share Posted June 22, 2005 interesting, inteRESTing.zzzzzzzz where did u put zaros in it u must have put him in and i cant see. ps. i may or may not have liked this story but pls respond to this as if it were bad http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123Yourgone Posted July 18, 2005 Author Share Posted July 18, 2005 Uh? :? lol I might post some more but most of its darker then this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123Yourgone Posted July 18, 2005 Author Share Posted July 18, 2005 Uh? :? lol I might post some more but most of its darker then this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescape102 Posted July 19, 2005 Share Posted July 19, 2005 not another poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 il level wit u i only read a bit of it and i think my statement says it all i thought it was stunning how u brought the imagery and the pictures together to for this truly ummm grand... thing http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 interesting, inteRESTing.zzzzzzzz where did u put zaros in it u must have put him in and i cant see. ps. i may or may not have liked this story but pls respond to this as if it were bad what is it with you and zaros?!?! okay poem 7/10 Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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