really like this one what you guys think, any suggestions?

 

 

 

working on a gif version but having trouble, will post it if i ever get it working

I'm not a big fan of this one. I hate the black text against the blue sky. I like the layout, but not the way it was executed. It has good balance and everything. That's what I meant about liking the layout. But there's something about the black text that I can't stand.

I really like the concept and the signature looks pretty good too. Quite simple, but it works. I'd get rid of some of the tech circle/border brushes though, especially those circles are a bit overpowering at the moment.