August 5, 200817 yr Yes I airbrushed one of the planets, because I didn't know a way how, until I looked at a tut. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
August 5, 200817 yr im not sure what it is thru :-# like what style and what expect for that style. for just a space pic it might be just a little too... unrealistic if it makes sense? its very cartoony. space is pitch black, and the bigger planet is messy around its edges. id say to improve this piece: 1. fix the edges to the big planet. 2. dont let the stars in the bg contrast the background, seeing that theyre waaaay too far away to light up anything up close. 3: nothing really, i just like making at least 3 points :P goodluck :) id never be able to make this so you get credit for that :lol:
August 5, 200817 yr Author I was thinking how does he know who I am, then I actually found out username reference. Ya, I might redo that planet. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
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August 6, 200817 yr Redoing the planet would be a plus. Pieces of it don't exist (west side of it cuts off a bit). I think the bright light on the bottom right of the planet is a bright star, right? And rings around a plant usually aren't wavy, but you might like it like that. :) Nice job for a first. |Signature by Jason321|
August 6, 200817 yr Yeah I'd redo the big planet, and maybe give it some more texture too. I like the small one though. pixel avvy by me deviantART
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