You may have seen my entry to the Thru thing, which I thought was total crap. I have updated it with added things to it.

 

 

 

 

That's the base for it, which I quite like. Well more, its the c4ds and effects-the render and stuff around it. C/c would be great.

 

 

 

V1:

 

 

You've seen it, and frankluy, its utter.... :geek:

 

 

 

V2:

 

 

Now I spent my time here. All the layers are open, so I can edit it, and post a V3, V4 etc. I would love some C/C.

It's already a lot better, but maybe try smudging a background first and then add the C4Ds. Some areas seem to have an unbroken layer of the background colour, which looks quite boring.

^Yes the "unbroken" parts are boring :(.

 

 

 

I suggest smudging some more C4Ds in the background as you usually do and use effect C4Ds to give it a bit of colour and please make a version without scan lines, makes me nuts for some reason :P. Good start on the green C4D, kind of odd colour though, can't wait to see what you'll do with it.

I like the c4d going down his spine, I'd blend your bg c4ds a bit more, and add something of a background, that looks like a gradient. :-#