Okay, this is _komodo_'s sig, its now FINALLY done rate and CC will be appreciated. The sig actually took me a LOT more time that i expected it would, but i think it was worth it. Also made an avatar for komodo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sig:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the avatar:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you :D

Armour looks to grainy.

 

 

 

Almost looks like a liquidy type armour.

 

 

 

Other than that, fix up the build a little, and you got a good signature on your hands.

thanks, im going to wait for other peoples comments before i go changing things in the sig too rushily, but that is a good point.

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hope u like that changes and stuff made :)

i think its pretty good for your 4th. I like the shading, but the body is too short. Like a midgets body. make the body thinner and taller.

still waiting for more replies--

It's pretty nice, how much are you charging for it?

Im doing it free of charge for _komodo_ this is just practice u know :P

 

 

 

But incase for some reason komodo doesnt want it (??), ill sell it for like 50k-100k.

You are making good progress :)

 

 

 

Hope to see you selling sigs 1m in some time :D

I might be :)

I might be :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If your backround is pretty good you probably will be.

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did a little of the background and fixed the right foot.

That's really good for your 4th attempt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I just did my second (first ever with a tutorial) it was a lot better than my first, but it still majorly sucks imho compared to many others including yours.

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did a little of the background and fixed the right foot.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey, I like it, but there are some things you should be working on. Firstly, I'll go with lineart problems.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Shoulderpad: It should only go up a little bit, not disfigure itself over the shoulder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Arms: They seem like they're coming out of the shoulderpads, not from the torso. The pads sho go over the shoulder, not decided where the arms hould fall.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The whip: Is too squigly. There is a technique called AA, or anti aliasing, which alows rough lines to look smoother, by using one or two pixels to form a small gradient between colors.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, the shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sheild: Is supposedly made of the same material, why does it not gleam like the rest? Also, it appears as though the shading on it is going in the opposite direction of the rest of the shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The chainmail/platebody: It doesn't actualy look like a chainbody, there is no texture. I suggest that you either learn how to make chainmail actualy look like chainmail (which is rather hard) or just ct like its a platebody. But, if it's a platebody, why is there only one highlight? Plate bodies have dips and crests along the abs and six pack, and whatever the rest of the muscles are. No, the muscles arent indenting into the armour, but usualy armour is made to look that way, because it's more intimidating.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm tired, so my final crit will be in the form of a question: Does everything in the world have the same texture, from skin to metal to oh, say leaves?

Now thats constructive critism :) Thanks a lot especially with the shoulderpad issue :D

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did a little of the background and fixed the right foot.

 

 

 

Hi there Posmo, sorry not replying before, I overslept today, and I didnt use the cumputer earlier :(

 

 

 

But its getting awsome, I liked the way the guy is, his pose. Oh, will you make it using a Dragon Med or another thing.

 

 

 

I cant wait to see it finished :D

 

 

 

The armor, I mean, legsm shield and chain, they look shiny, really cool!

Okay,komodo im going to update it again soon, there are a few things id like to as you:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1:hair?(what kind of hair, long, short.. and the color of the hair.

 

 

 

2:what kind of expression to the guys face (really angry looking, "just another days wrok" -looking or like really focused on the fight. -stuff like that)

 

 

 

3:the noob he is owning, when u gave me the first details of the sig, u just said "noob" everyone knows what noobs look like but still a little bit of details wouldnt hurt :)

Okay, phew nearly done with the sig updated it a "little". Im still going to add a cape , the opponent and multiple fights going on the background.. so thats about it CC is always welcome :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Still need to do what the other guy said (guy who made a proper C+C comment) and make the left (our view, not the characters view) and make his shoulder pad go down or whatever he said.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, make the floor maybe...not a loada rectangular patches of colour and maybe make it look detailed, and erm...like on the Chain? I dunno lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And detail the top wall panels?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, maybe work more on the crowd? :lol:

1st of all , i dont NEED to do anything, i just did this sig for fun and for practice, and the shoulderpad i think it looks pretty cool like that,i might change it if komodo really wants me to.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And,detail.I will still add more details at the same time i do all the major things..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ur floor comment was good, i know it looks kinda dull but could u explain to me how i should make it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks--

 

 

 

Okay, phew nearly done with the sig updated it a "little". Im still going to add a cape , the opponent and multiple fights going on the background.. so thats about it CC is always welcome

 

 

 

The Background is getting great too, I loved that 2 little "noobs" in the back and all blood!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Okay,komodo im going to update it again soon, there are a few things id like to as you:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1:hair?(what kind of hair, long, short.. and the color of the hair.

 

 

 

2:what kind of expression to the guys face (really angry looking, "just another days wrok" -looking or like really focused on the fight. -stuff like that)

 

 

 

3:the noob he is owning, when u gave me the first details of the sig, u just said "noob" everyone knows what noobs look like but still a little bit of details wouldnt hurt :)

 

 

 

1- I think this wouldnt make much diference because he will be using a Dragon Med.

 

 

 

2- Angry please

 

 

 

3- Dont need to be a noob at all, you can make it anyway, I mean, Ranger, Melee or a Mage, maybe the 3 ones :lol: :lol: . Oh, I almost forgot, if you can, make the stakes in the Backgorund, I mean, the stakes he won, like Phats, Draggy items, coins etc, if this is too hard, or you dont want to do its okay! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1st of all , i dont NEED to do anything, i just did this sig for fun and for practice, and the shoulderpad i think it looks pretty cool like that,i might change it if komodo really wants me to.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And,detail.I will still add more details at the same time i do all the major things..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ur floor comment was good, i know it looks kinda dull but could u explain to me how i should make it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I think the shoulder pad is great, no need of chabges. The sig is getting greater and greater each time i see!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry again for not replaying before, I gave been too busy this week :wall: :?

I'm 'the guy who gave proper c/c' :lol: Names Godslayer, guy who said that to me.

How is it going?

That's a really nice sig if you ask me , how long did it take you ? :?: 8)

Ok, im nearly done with this one, just gotta add some background fights and the winning behind the full drag dude.

 

 

 

The sig:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Notes: I know that the full rune guy looks a little small, but i cant be bothered to fix it (Its a free sig after all) i also fixed the upper blocks of the stone wall to look more 3d. +some changes i dont remember. :wink: