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1st Ever Attempt


PureKing44

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Im accepting and noting all C+C for further attempts!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please note im a t Level 0.1 as a pixel artist.

 

 

 

The "wip" looks like a snake, make it longer, and change the yellow color to a white one

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good for a first, better than mine, lol i practicly traced a guy's, just for practice not for ripping to all you ripper haters like me. i thought the whip was a snake too, maybe you could have it someone (since you arent ready for a monster yet. you could show more of the arm and make it buff, always helps, and then just take out the period, thsi is a sig not a sentence. I dont know what to say, Im not much of a CnCer.

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Sorry to be rude but why do you have to say it's pretty good for a first ?

 

 

 

In my modest opinion it's totaly ugly and pointless. There's almost nothing going on so it's pretty embarassing calling it an attempt.

 

 

 

Do you realy think you'd help him saying it's allright ? Nahh...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1)It's saved as .Jpg , that's the biggest mistake for a pixel sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2) The design is totaly wrong, whip too short and fat, with wrong colors 2 (seems more like a molten candy stick) and the hand has 6 fingers (all sharp as teeth) and a bluish halo around the kunkles (not sure of the english here)... That gives the 100% of your drawn stuff a lot of stuff to heavely work on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3) The sig, as it's designed...seems pointless....Looks like you'r gonna fill it little by little with whatever come to your mind...Result ? Ugly pointless sig. First of all think about what you'r gonna do with your sig. Make a plan of who will be in the sig, what will be the setting and what will be going on.

 

 

 

Draw a crappy outline to define the sig or, better, refine the outlines, forgetting about colors, till you'lll have your final outlines. Then start thinking about the colors together with the shading (if you'r not very familiar with shading then just fill up the sig with the colors, making various tests to help your choice and the, in a second time, shade every block little by little.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4) What's going on with the border ? at least make it a closed line...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Enough said. Now it's true that this is a first try but don't take it as an excuse to make a 5 min work of crappy quality. Pixeling is just a matter of how hard you work and how much time you spend on it, with a good backup coming from your drawing abilities. Posting a 2 minutes work as poor as this is pretty pointless both for you and us. You'd better work harder and a little longer before posting again. With time you'll get better, if you try to !

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