here it is rate it and well put ideas on what to put on the grass or ground

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't get it.

kinda dark :?

the rip stone looks like its made of rubber, and like its bending over backwards, and the reaper looks like he's rather chubby, especially for only being bones also the scythe handle looks rather wide and the second tree across the road looks really flat the way u drew it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i just wanted to tell u ur shading is really good, i like it

anyy idea's? or ratings

anyy idea's? or ratings

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

kingcomet32 just gave you a good response. Number ratings don't mean anything so just ask for c/c. I like the lack of bold outlines and the softer colors, but I think the drawing and proportions are just off.

kinda dark :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wow what a surprise.. it turns dark at night-time?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't get it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what is there to get.. theres a grim reaper coming to take a dead guy to lumby?

 

 

 

theres a guy in your sig pointing.. i dont get that either..?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

he aint chubby! anyone ever noticed the thick layer of clothing upon the grim reaper.

 

 

 

he actualy got a very slim waist .. anybody noticedd the difference between the clothing on the arms and body if you look close you'll see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dont like the trees..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it needs a horizon.

 

 

 

it needs a spook-a-spooka-dook-a-spooky tree forest?

The guy in my sig is pointing to my name.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Am I to beleive the red blob in the corner is a person? And why would the grim reaper be taking someone *to* Lumy...if they're already there. :? How can you see the reapers waist?

there not in lumby if they were i would have drawn lumby and he bought his robes in a bigger size to grow into ;) he told me so and he said on the beer advert in uk too but am i supposed to believe your person in your sig has 1 leg a small neck and big hands? YES

What are you talking about? There's no one in my sig! If there was, he wouldnt have one leg, he would have a robe on. Oh well, I don't have a guy in there. :wink: So, he's not in lumy, but there's still a random sign that says Lumbridge?

yep its a sign post so people dont get lost ;) grim reaper could get confused and send people to varrock not very usefull :o

The guy in my sig is pointing to my name.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Am I to beleive the red blob in the corner is a person? And why would the grim reaper be taking someone *to* Lumy...if they're already there. :? How can you see the reapers waist?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yes siree we call that a waist ..hooah.

 

 

 

location boards (uhh that thing that says lumby :oops: ) allways are ponting towards the path so the travellers can see that they are in lumby.. wooptdeedoo

 

 

 

however direction boards point towards the place indicated on the board, so TO lumby :wink: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the shading is brilliant, could use contrast but brilliant it is indeed.

I for one, don't like the shading. Why? It's to flat. Add higher contrast. Other things to note is that the blade of the reaper is level with the grassline/path, making it somewhat harder to notice, and making the picture duller. Tombstone looking like rubber is allready noted... Well, that leaves me with saying that you need to work on your drawing skills, because some things on there look strangely misformed, and the composition is far from great. Good luck on your next one :)

i don't like how the path is drawn.... i thought he was sitting in a ditch for a while.... yes that tombstone is kind of "wiggly" and the color of the grim reaper kind of matches his robes so its kind of hard to see... I LOVE YOUR SIG! as it is... don't change it.... only blazer work i get to see