Coandca5 Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 Rate+ CC? For some reason the quality is really, really bad..but I didn't make it like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stilev Posted September 14, 2008 Share Posted September 14, 2008 The flow from the white to the red doesn't really work for me, looks like you just pasted the red back there. the name could also us some work. overall ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 14, 2008 Share Posted September 14, 2008 It's not bad for a first sprite signature, but I don't really like the white cloud-ish thing either. The C4D effects/background are decent, it flows quite well, but it looks a bit messy. Trying to make effects and background look smooth and clean is usually the way to go with sprites. Also, having the focal point (the sprite in this case) in the middle doesn't work that well most of the time, use the Rule of Thirds. It's not bad though, you seem to have quite a good knowledge of the basics. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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