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Shiny is Back from skiing (New sigs)


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Well I'm back from skiing, and I have a couple of sigs (sprites) to post, including a colab with Jas.

 

 

 

So to start off got a pokemon sprite (Dragonair I think)

 

 

 

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Mainly smudging practice

 

 

 

And A mass of colabs....

 

 

 

LeanGreen.jpg

 

Here's my original, showed to Jas and he wanted to colab....

 

 

 

But first he told me to rid some stuff so...

 

 

 

sprite-meditation.png

 

 

 

He took it, and did this with it...

 

yayornei.png

 

 

 

And with the final outcome Like this:

 

yayorneihn5.png

 

 

 

Thanks, and C/c would be great.

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I think your style still still have the same problem, it's the smudging which doesn't go well as a effect, I would stick with it for backgrounds.

 

 

 

You and jason made a pretty gud job with the sprite :thumbup:.

 

 

 

The sprite is kind of bad imo because it look stained and the colours doesn't go well. The blending feels incomplete and style itself doesn't go well with sprites.

 

 

 

Sorry for the harsh words but I really think that you're not improving to well as you stick with the same effects over and over again.

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The collab is cool, I just wish Jason had left some of the wireframes in there instead of smudging them completely though. That would make the background more interesting and it would help the depth.

 

 

 

As for the Pokémon sprite, I don't like it at all. I think it has major colour problems, and the smudging looks filter-piled and LQ. The pink things (which I assume are C4Ds) just seem to be floating there randomly which doesn't help the composition or flow. Also, I'd definitely stop using those tech brushes, they don't go well with any abstract sig IMO.

 

 

 

Same as Julius, sorry for the harshness, but I also think you should try doing a different style instead of sticking to what you know.

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