well im going to attempt the thing bellow. im only posting it because i think i did a really good job on the linework and that has been a problem for me everytime i make pixel's.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well...The concept is nice...but i hope you'r not serious about the linework. IT's still a mess. Why don't you refine it and post how the final linework will be ? The body position seems ok (maybe his right arm is a bit messed up and the left one, with NO linework on it, seems deformed) Anyway this is not a linework, it's a sketch. Linework should provide a clear, clean idea of the main details of the image and some smaller, yet important ones. And your guy still misses face, armor detail (it looks more like an onion now) and most importantly, all the lines are trembling and dirty and the simmetry of the armor is kinda spoiled by the jelly look the trembling lines give to it, making it look weird. Keep it up anyway.

 

 

 

Post the final linework.

 

 

 

Might come out something nice.

they are jelly like because the crappt jpg format. anyway ive finished it and i like the result. hes not suposed to have a face :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any c/c?

A grey person with no face against a blue background? The sketch looked promising, but in my opinion you messed it up. Continue on the linework you had and don't worry about any sigs yet.

its not compleatly finished. im making a fire background for it and fire takes a while. also hes metal :) and the face was burnt...in the fire

its not compleatly finished. im making a fire background for it and fire takes a while. also hes metal :) and the face was burnt...in the fire

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sounds like "New Glass-Climbing World Record" to me.

 

 

 

The guy still looks more jelly than metallic. The lines are still messed up, actualy even more since you resized it and lost some pixels along the way.

 

 

 

The no face idea looks like a dead end to me. You might go for a metallic face, but not for a grey foorball oval instead of the head.

 

 

 

The hand is a mess, literaly.

 

 

 

The shading is...kinda disappointing. It looks like some dithering attempt gone wrong. it gives a decent result on the body but mainly fails on the arms, expecialy his left one. Anyway it's not fitting an hot metal surface (as it should be since you plan to have him standing in the flames...). You'd better add some reflections and, very important, tone the whole metal colors to red...since that's the color it will take, being an hot metal (you might go for an almost melting choice...solid red, or a simple reflecting metal...)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep it up...