Any comments?

[Laxaria]

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Yea I know its a render used so many times, but nonetheless.[/hide]

 

 

 

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Still, commonly used render[/hide]

 

 

 

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Thanks.

[ThruItAll]

Too monotone,

 

text is bad,

 

bad blending,

 

too sharp,

 

no depth,

 

bad borders,

 

near to rubbish execution,

 

floating heads.

 

 

 

I know only number 3 has text, but I wouldn't bother put it on anything.

 

Blending, you blend to much, seems like you just lasso it. Aka, bad blending, just don't blend at all, I'd say it'd look better, then put effects on top.

 

Too sharp. Well, obviously you've oversharpened it.

 

No depth - Need some realism in here, to make it look like hes not just floating in your brushes. e.g blur you're background so it looks further away from your focal, rather than right next to it.

 

Bad borders. Don't put them on, or dont set on overlay.

 

Execution. Well, the floating heads just kill this, execution is how well you put across the piece, with you'res they're all too messy.

 

Floating heads, use a bit more of the render.

 

 

 

Hope this helped.

[Soa]

You forgot one ^

 

Try to make your renders the focal. You seem to be concentrating on the effects more than your render placement.