LpoleysArch Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 [P U L Ss E,Dec 11 2008, 08:07 PM] that looks REALLY nice. think you could make me a Mike Relm sig? :D could pay if needed. He posted this on FOE forums. Here is what I came up with. Please Rate & CC. 1/10-10/10? -Lp The Sig: The 2 stocks I used: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 It looks pretty cool. However I think the centre render should be bigger, don't be limited by the canvas space. Also the renders look pretty out of place against the background, try blending them to give better flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Colors are bad, Its blurry Composition is bland its plain bad border bad text placement of stocks is bland, Change the color - make it monotone towards a certain color, but that doesn't mean you can't have a mix of colours, but yours arent even used well. Sharpen it :P Composition, instead of just the record being in the sig, use that stock and put a motion blur to give it a sense of depth and movement in the sig. Needs more effects. Take of the border, take off the text. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LpoleysArch Posted December 16, 2008 Author Share Posted December 16, 2008 Colors are bad, Its blurry Composition is bland its plain bad border bad text placement of stocks is bland, Change the color - make it monotone towards a certain color, but that doesn't mean you can't have a mix of colours, but yours arent even used well. Sharpen it :P Composition, instead of just the record being in the sig, use that stock and put a motion blur to give it a sense of depth and movement in the sig. Needs more effects. Take of the border, take off the text. LOL, I disagree with you majorly. Its plain for one, ok... :roll: I like the border, and text, the stocks where purposly placed like that as well. I am tired of the same plain old sigs with an abstract and render blend, abstract and text, or cd4 and text with some brushing. My current style is different. I am sorry you cannot appreciate it. :thumbsup: Heres the version you asked for minus the filter. Totally different style that I was not after. I obviously threw that together in a few secs from what I had, I would have took off the border on the sofa and not used the filter and blended it manually. I also wouldnt have the bg and renders both be the same texture. It would look a whole lot better but I am just giving you all the idea. Thanks for the CC none the less :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 I let you down gently. thats what i meant. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LpoleysArch Posted December 16, 2008 Author Share Posted December 16, 2008 I let you down gently. thats what i meant. Ok, I see what you mean now. Although I really dig that and :thumbup: :thumbup: . That is not what I was going for. Thanks for the CC and different style perspective anyhow. 8-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Colors are bad, Its blurry Composition is bland its plain bad border bad text placement of stocks is bland, Change the color - make it monotone towards a certain color, but that doesn't mean you can't have a mix of colours, but yours arent even used well. Sharpen it :P Composition, instead of just the record being in the sig, use that stock and put a motion blur to give it a sense of depth and movement in the sig. Needs more effects. Take of the border, take off the text. This. It's really boring and there is no real good focal point at all. The color scheme needs a major change too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LpoleysArch Posted December 16, 2008 Author Share Posted December 16, 2008 Colors are bad, Its blurry Composition is bland its plain bad border bad text placement of stocks is bland, Change the color - make it monotone towards a certain color, but that doesn't mean you can't have a mix of colours, but yours arent even used well. Sharpen it :P Composition, instead of just the record being in the sig, use that stock and put a motion blur to give it a sense of depth and movement in the sig. Needs more effects. Take of the border, take off the text. This. It's really boring and there is no real good focal point at all. The color scheme needs a major change too. TY \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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