VjuliusT Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 I'm going downhill, so advice on this one would be highly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Hard to tell what the focal point is.... Geez Julius.... You need to do art more frequent. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venomai Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 The composition is pretty poor. Needs work on focal point, depth, 'flow' (eye movement), colour, organization. As a whole, the sig is uninteresting. My advice would be to learn the elements of design, colour theory, etc. Random brushing will only get you so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Gah! Remove that brushing! The tag will look so much better then :thumbup: 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPandy Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 omgmyeyesdied Really Julius, what is up with the white smudging/brushing thing\/ It really takes your attention away from the focal. From what I can see of the background, it's pretty good. Just take out the brusing and you'll be fine :thumbup: So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted January 4, 2009 Author Share Posted January 4, 2009 Thanks :thumbup:, I'll give it another shot today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_Latios Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Must... find... focal... point. Focal... point... nonexistent... *dies* IRC Nick: Hiroki | 99 Agility | Max Quest Points | 138 CombatBandos drops: 20 Hilt | 22 Chestplate | 21 Tassets | 14 Boots Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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