Da_Latios Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 [hide=Fullsize image(1680x1050)][/hide] Improvement suggestions? IRC Nick: Hiroki | 99 Agility | Max Quest Points | 138 CombatBandos drops: 20 Hilt | 22 Chestplate | 21 Tassets | 14 Boots Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 I really dislike the January and 2009 text. Other than that it's boring. I realize it's minimalistic, but still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da_Latios Posted January 6, 2009 Author Share Posted January 6, 2009 I appreciate that, but that doesn't exactly help to improve, does it? IRC Nick: Hiroki | 99 Agility | Max Quest Points | 138 CombatBandos drops: 20 Hilt | 22 Chestplate | 21 Tassets | 14 Boots Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 Don't make the January 2009 text blend in with the lines. There is no point for the focal to be harder to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venomai Posted January 6, 2009 Share Posted January 6, 2009 Something you could try that would still keep the text interesting: 1. Remove the blue strips 2. Make the white part taller so that January isn't getting so cut off. 3. Make "2009" white and move it up so that it looks like it's part of the white strip (like what you have now, but attached to the white instead of the blue). Also, don't cut it off so much. Even if this is done, I can still see the piece looking rather boring. Minimalist work should still have something of interest to look at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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