yaff2 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 Well, this is the first 'real' thing i have done in photoshop in for ever! and i think it turned out real well :) What do you think 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 25, 2009 Share Posted January 25, 2009 It's not bad, but the background is way too noisy IMO. The blending is decent, but I'm not a big fan of the colours; the signature just seems too monotone and a bit too washed out. Also, I'd take off the border. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 It's not bad, but the background is way too noisy IMO. The blending is decent, but I'm not a big fan of the colours; the signature just seems too monotone and a bit too washed out. Also, I'd take off the border. +1 The lighting seems very awkward and weird. You have a bright spot on the bottom left, yet it doesn't seem to be affecting any bit more of the sig. The background is too messy, as stated. The compositiion is good, but it is lacking flow and good lighting. Work on the rule of thirds for this one as most of the sig is empty space with no special effect to compliment the focal, so the focal needs to be shifted a little to the left. Colors seem nice, but they don't show a lot of variance. Try to add some reds and purples in there instead of just pink, white and black. The odd flying things in the right are a little distracting, but that's just me. Its not too bad for a "first real thing", but keep at it nonetheless. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 Fair enough, next time ill keep that all in mind. and just so you know, because it seems as if you dont, im no noob to photoshop. im actually pretty decent, just havnet done nothing in a long time 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 ^ Yeah I know, you used to make some ownage sprite siggies. :D Welcome back (I hope). :P pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 I really dont get the fuss over my sprites lol i never thought they were good... a few maybe but rarely.. Thanks :) im slowly returning, but still not 100% 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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