Shiny Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 I made me some lineart. Free to use, but don't sell :shame: . The original, which I inked this morning. You can download the lineart here: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=H0V79CWC I don't know if I did it right. But Critique and Comments would be good. Especially concerning anatomy, which I think I got basically right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Shouldn't line art be... cleaner? Go trace over your lines with black in a graphics program. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 28, 2009 Share Posted January 28, 2009 Meh, it doesn't really matter Uno, it's still a usable piece of art ;) I think it looks quite good, though a whole body sketch would of been great. Doesn't really matter though :roll: The only thing that looks a little weird is his right cheek (our left) - I don't know what it is, whether it be shading or something else weird, I'm stumped. I'm just not sure about how it looks. Finally - did you use a reference? If so, could I see it please? Pwetyy pweeze? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 28, 2009 Author Share Posted January 28, 2009 I used one of my batman comics as a base reference. My bro got pretty mad with me, cos they aren't mine, so he probably won't let me load them up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate_Felix Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 The shapes of his eyes arent the same. (Wuts Copyright 09? =P~ ) [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 30, 2009 Author Share Posted January 30, 2009 I always knwe I had trouble with the eyes. Any constructive crit about the anatomy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nom Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 The fingers of his right hand are paper thin. And I don't get the huge dip in the fingers of his left. Is there any reason his index finger is that much higher than the others? Looks like a straight handle to me. Also, his right eye should be more in shadow, and it's hard to tell that his mouth is open. I think all you need to do to fix that is clean up the lines a bit, maybe add some shadow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 ^ You said about the index finger; anatomy in DC comics is normally exagerrated slightly ;) 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 It looks pretty good, though indeed a little bit messy. Might be because of the pencil marks that are still quite clearly visible in some places, maybe you could try to get rid of some of them with a soft eraser. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxaria Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Yea the finger looks weird. Its not bad, to be honest. :) Now fill in his legs. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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