January 28, 200917 yr I made me some lineart. Free to use, but don't sell :shame: . The original, which I inked this morning. You can download the lineart here: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=H0V79CWC I don't know if I did it right. But Critique and Comments would be good. Especially concerning anatomy, which I think I got basically right.
January 28, 200917 yr Shouldn't line art be... cleaner? Go trace over your lines with black in a graphics program. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
January 28, 200917 yr Meh, it doesn't really matter Uno, it's still a usable piece of art ;) I think it looks quite good, though a whole body sketch would of been great. Doesn't really matter though :roll: The only thing that looks a little weird is his right cheek (our left) - I don't know what it is, whether it be shading or something else weird, I'm stumped. I'm just not sure about how it looks. Finally - did you use a reference? If so, could I see it please? Pwetyy pweeze? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
January 28, 200917 yr Author I used one of my batman comics as a base reference. My bro got pretty mad with me, cos they aren't mine, so he probably won't let me load them up.
January 30, 200917 yr The shapes of his eyes arent the same. (Wuts Copyright 09? =P~ ) [hide]Felix, je moeder.Je moeder felixJe vader, felix.Felix, je oma.Felix, je ongelofelijk gave pwnaze avatar B)Felix, je moeder.[/hide]
January 30, 200917 yr Author I always knwe I had trouble with the eyes. Any constructive crit about the anatomy?
January 30, 200917 yr The fingers of his right hand are paper thin. And I don't get the huge dip in the fingers of his left. Is there any reason his index finger is that much higher than the others? Looks like a straight handle to me. Also, his right eye should be more in shadow, and it's hard to tell that his mouth is open. I think all you need to do to fix that is clean up the lines a bit, maybe add some shadow.
January 30, 200917 yr ^ You said about the index finger; anatomy in DC comics is normally exagerrated slightly ;) 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
January 31, 200917 yr It looks pretty good, though indeed a little bit messy. Might be because of the pencil marks that are still quite clearly visible in some places, maybe you could try to get rid of some of them with a soft eraser. pixel avvy by me deviantART
January 31, 200917 yr Yea the finger looks weird. Its not bad, to be honest. :) Now fill in his legs. deviantArt | A book without a cover | My poems | My SigsI'm an artist of words.
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