February 7, 200917 yr The focal is waaaay too bright. I can't see anything and it hurts my eyes. That aside, the rest of it looks pretty good :P
February 7, 200917 yr My god you're improving fast O_o But yeah, focal is too bright, tune it down a 'lil and BANG! You got yourself a good piece. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
February 7, 200917 yr Looks good, though the focal needs toning done, it looks posterized (Where the colours don't smoothly mix into each other) and the flow needs work.
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