Hey what you think of my parodies?

[armybuilder]

Hey-oh all there.

 

 

 

first of all i hope this is in the right place comes under music so ill put it here.

 

 

 

Now im a 16 year old drummer (not a singer) and people say i have a knack for writing parodys. ive written three so far and each of them has become well know with my friends.

 

 

 

Recently i half formed a band with my best mate and another friend and we wanted to be a little different so i thought why not just do parodies. So i sat down with an idea in my head for a couple of songs.

 

One i wrote when i was coming back on a plane from sweden Called Baldstar sadly the lyrics are on my laptop and its in for repairs atm so i cant get those. The second and third are both on a topic that me and my friends are quite big on. Now i have a friend who we all think has a crush on our chemistry teacher. The womens pretty old old enough to be his mother even grandmother. An amazing teacher none the less despite her humour.. Anyway i set about to write a couple of songs about it.

 

 

 

First was

 

 

 

 

What Gaz Goes to School for

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KyDFSTxbFQs

 

This is the original song. Yes most of you will know the Jonas brothers one. However this is the original and the best one. Its said to be so much better if you listen to the song whilst reading or singing the lyrics so here's the song

 

 

 

The lyrics

 

 

 

Oh ye yeah

 

 

 

 

 

The equations echo in my mind

 

I count the days till she is mine

 

I cant tell my friends cos they will laugh

 

I love a member of the staff

 

 

 

And I fight my way to the front of class

 

To get the best view of her [wagon].

 

I drop my burette on the floor

 

She bends down and I go Phwoar!

 

 

 

 

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

We all think shes a real bore.

 

Its just for us lessons are hazy

 

But I know Shutters craves me

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

We all think shes a real bore

 

Lessons I have plenty

 

But none like Chem-istry

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

 

 

So she maybe 63

 

But that doesnt bother me.

 

Her conventions out of town

 

I find a reason to play around

 

I climb a tree outside her home to make shes alone

 

I see her in her star trek gear

 

I cant help but stop and stare

 

 

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

We all think shes a real bore.

 

Its just her lessons are hazy

 

But I know Shutters craves me

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

We all think shes a real bore

 

Lessons I have plenty

 

But none like Chem-istry

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

 

 

 

 

Everyone that you teach all day

 

But you're looking at me in a different way

 

I guess, that's why

 

My Bunsens getting so high

 

I can see those tell-tale signs

 

Telling me its not just chemistry on your mind

 

I can see that you wanted more

 

When you told me that gaz is what you go to school for

 

Gaz is what you go to school for

 

 

 

Shes got her equipment its in the trunk

 

Looks like gaz isnt going to flunk

 

They drive past school and wave goodbye

 

Me and the guys we cant believe our eyes

 

 

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

We all think shes a real bore.

 

Its just for us her lessons are hazy

 

But I know Shutters craves me

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

We all think shes a real bore

 

Lessons I have plenty

 

But none like Chem-istry

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

Thats what gaz goes to school for

 

 

 

 

 

Original By Busted

 

Adapted by Tom Chadwick

 

 

 

With Special Thanks to

 

Matthew Nolan

 

Gareth Liles

 

And

 

Dr Shutt

 

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Secondly is My Mistress.

 

Once again this is on the same topic of my friend and his crush. This is the better of the two if you ask me.

 

once again its better if you listen to the song at the same time so heres the link

 

 

 

My Mistress

 

By Tom Chadwick

 

Original By Busted

 

Lets go!

 

Yeah! Alright

 

 

 

Walking through the classroom door

 

I saw something beautiful

 

You left, to go get some forrrmmm

 

Next im waiting for the test.

 

Thats when I hear you again

 

Your voice is filling up my brain

 

 

 

Lets go

 

That lab coat you are wearing

 

So sleek I cant stop staring

 

Your bleached whites are ever so cold

 

My Bunsen flame is rising

 

My limewaters is shooting nooooOoow

 

 

 

My mistress

 

I like the way you dress

 

Though physics should die

 

Cos chemistries better

 

Occupied my mind

 

With a periodic letter.

 

I messed my pants

 

While we were burning plants

 

Cos I smell the fumes

 

In my chem class room

 

For an ill-legal romance

 

My mistress.

 

 

 

Boiling peanuts into bile

 

Terrible but it made you smile

 

You came over for a while

 

Then you whispered in my ear

 

The words that I longed to hear

 

"I want you to thrill me here"

 

 

 

You can't because you're working

 

The Science departments smirking

 

You didnt know Im such a hand

 

Dont under estimate me

 

Chemistry is my hundred grand

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My mistress

 

I like the way you dress

 

Though physics should die

 

Cos chemistries much better

 

Occupied my mind

 

With a periodic letter.

 

I messed my pants

 

While we were burning plants

 

Cos I smell the fumes

 

In my chem class room

 

For an ill-legal romance

 

My mistress.

 

 

 

Na-na-na-na-na

 

Na-na-na-na-na

 

Na-na-na-na-na

 

Na-na-na-na-na

 

Na-na-na-na-na

 

 

 

 

 

That lab coat you are wearing

 

So sleek I cant stop staring

 

Your bleached whites are ever so cold

 

My Bunsen flame is rising

 

My limewaters is shooting nooooOoow

 

 

 

My mistress

 

I like the way you dress

 

Though physics should die

 

Cos chemistries much better

 

Occupied my mind

 

With a periodic letter.

 

I messed my pants

 

While we were burning plants

 

Cos I smell the fumes

 

In my chem class room

 

For an ill-legal romance

 

My mistress.

 

 

 

Cos Youre my mistress

 

I love the way you dress

 

My Mistress

 

Youre my mistress

 

I love the way you dress

 

My Mistress

 

 

 

 

 

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As i said these are being played with my band and as soon as we've finished it well record it and ill post a link to it here. Im a drummer/writer so its not the most usual of things but i enjoy it +)

 

 

 

So Please tell me what you think and most of all Have a laugh

 

 

 

Yours

 

Army

[angryjoe]

they are rubbish. you should never speak again.

[Jernlov]

Awful.

[Kiriyama]

Dude, they're barely even parodies, just because you change some words doesn't make it a parody.

 

 

 

You should change the subject of the song while making it sound similar.Really, I just skimmed over the lyrics and found them terrible.