This is my first decent tag, after around 5 bad ones. And my first really grungy one in so long. This tag was going to be a collab, but I saw something in it, so I decided to pursue it. Any constructive criticism?

 

 

 

Haven't you already posted this? Or am I thinking of another tag made by you which uses the same render?

 

The border is whacked up. Why does it suddenly get cut off? :? The effects are pretty good, and the focal is slightly big, but it looks god.

I like it, but the text really puts me off.

text & border need to go, and the horizontal scanline should be lowered opacity, or erased to make it look more like tv transmission if you get what I mean ;)