Shiny Posted March 7, 2009 Share Posted March 7, 2009 This is my first decent tag, after around 5 bad ones. And my first really grungy one in so long. This tag was going to be a collab, but I saw something in it, so I decided to pursue it. Any constructive criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted March 7, 2009 Share Posted March 7, 2009 Haven't you already posted this? Or am I thinking of another tag made by you which uses the same render? The border is whacked up. Why does it suddenly get cut off? :? The effects are pretty good, and the focal is slightly big, but it looks god. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted March 8, 2009 Share Posted March 8, 2009 I like it, but the text really puts me off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted March 8, 2009 Share Posted March 8, 2009 text & border need to go, and the horizontal scanline should be lowered opacity, or erased to make it look more like tv transmission if you get what I mean ;) 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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