mi3agent Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 i made this for free to get a start in pixeling. please give me CC, thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lowgravity Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 That's really good for a first, it's obvious what's going on, and it has been executed well, things you should work on are as follows : Clean up your lines, this means removing any joining pixels that aren't necessary EG : Think about textures, (floor should be more dirty). More stuff, like rocks and skulls around, makes a big difference. If you're going to outline one thing in black outline everything. Practice practice practice :) . Hope to see more stuff from you in the future. Lowgravity, I want to be just like you. But...I never will be as 1337 as you. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 I dont have really much to add since Lowgravity said almost everything, but I think yo should redo the drag sword. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mi3agent Posted August 8, 2005 Author Share Posted August 8, 2005 thx for all the CC guys, could use some more though :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 If the rune guy on the right is tight up...then that person with the dragon scimitar should have a whip >_ Good job on the lighting, but you got the shadow wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
transmetal Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 like cupcake said, lighting is nice. I notice some errors in there. The box in the back seems to be floating, so I suggest you move that back part of the top box a little lower so it would align w/ the top of the bottom-right box. I hope u know what I mean, it does sound kind of ocnfusing the way I said it. Another thing I noticed was that the stones on horizontal wall are crooked and the lines don't match evenly. On the right wall, well, they are aligned. try to keep more of a consistent look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 You mean like your avatar needs? Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 nice shadows :D ya, finer lines needed and the shadow of the main char thats closest to us needs to be lighter aand the d scim needs work, other than that, very nice :) J272 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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