i made this for free to get a start in pixeling.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please give me CC, thx!

That's really good for a first, it's obvious what's going on, and it has been executed well, things you should work on are as follows :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Clean up your lines, this means removing any joining pixels that aren't necessary EG :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Think about textures, (floor should be more dirty).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More stuff, like rocks and skulls around, makes a big difference.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you're going to outline one thing in black outline everything.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Practice practice practice :) .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope to see more stuff from you in the future.

I dont have really much to add since Lowgravity said almost everything, but I think yo should redo the drag sword.

thx for all the CC guys, could use some more though :)

If the rune guy on the right is tight up...then that person with the dragon scimitar should have a whip >_

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job on the lighting, but you got the shadow wrong

like cupcake said, lighting is nice. I notice some errors in there. The box in the back seems to be floating, so I suggest you move that back part of the top box a little lower so it would align w/ the top of the bottom-right box. I hope u know what I mean, it does sound kind of ocnfusing the way I said it. Another thing I noticed was that the stones on horizontal wall are crooked and the lines don't match evenly. On the right wall, well, they are aligned. try to keep more of a consistent look.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You mean like your avatar needs?

nice shadows :D ya, finer lines needed and the shadow of the main char thats closest to us needs to be lighter aand the d scim needs work, other than that, very nice :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272