Ok i made this for a contest, so CC please. DonÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâôt flame. please.

ok lets see..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the head stalks (lol, necks) are too skinny. and the anatomy and linework isnt that great either. the shading needs to show the texture of the item so if something is metal make it shiny, if something is leather make it look like whatever you think leather looks like, but if it was fixed up it would be a good sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its c/c btw (dont hurt me)

ok lets see..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the head stalks (lol, necks) are too skinny. and the anatomy and linework isnt that great either. the shading needs to show the texture of the item so if something is metal make it shiny, if something is leather make it look like whatever you think leather looks like, but if it was fixed up it would be a good sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its c/c btw (dont hurt me)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well actually it looks similar to your character in that sig your using so you might as well be sayin that to your character too, his shadin is much better and its actually pretty good and cartoony :D . anatomy doesnt really matter when it comes to cartoons but I still think you should make the skin less 'orangey' and maybe add something behind the back fence cus it just looks like its the edge of the world there or somethin..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10 tho still, a lot to be changed to make it 'great'.

Well, its nice, but I think the name is hard to see, and the foot of the guy in dragon is a bit wierd.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7/10, almost great!

Alright. Thanks everyone (auicroa, dont worry, i wont hurt you...yet)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i will work on it a bit and post update... what could i add in the back so it doesnt look like the edge of the world?

terley i have known that since i started pixeling, people thought it was cool for a bit, had alot of customers, had too many customers had to close.