susta99 Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 Ok i made this for a contest, so CC please. DonÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâôt flame. please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 ok lets see.. the head stalks (lol, necks) are too skinny. and the anatomy and linework isnt that great either. the shading needs to show the texture of the item so if something is metal make it shiny, if something is leather make it look like whatever you think leather looks like, but if it was fixed up it would be a good sig. its c/c btw (dont hurt me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 ok lets see.. the head stalks (lol, necks) are too skinny. and the anatomy and linework isnt that great either. the shading needs to show the texture of the item so if something is metal make it shiny, if something is leather make it look like whatever you think leather looks like, but if it was fixed up it would be a good sig. its c/c btw (dont hurt me) well actually it looks similar to your character in that sig your using so you might as well be sayin that to your character too, his shadin is much better and its actually pretty good and cartoony :D . anatomy doesnt really matter when it comes to cartoons but I still think you should make the skin less 'orangey' and maybe add something behind the back fence cus it just looks like its the edge of the world there or somethin.. 7/10 tho still, a lot to be changed to make it 'great'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 Well, its nice, but I think the name is hard to see, and the foot of the guy in dragon is a bit wierd. 7/10, almost great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
susta99 Posted August 15, 2005 Author Share Posted August 15, 2005 Alright. Thanks everyone (auicroa, dont worry, i wont hurt you...yet) i will work on it a bit and post update... what could i add in the back so it doesnt look like the edge of the world? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 terley i have known that since i started pixeling, people thought it was cool for a bit, had alot of customers, had too many customers had to close. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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