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Zakors

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Okay I just finish my first web-site, but it will not be my last, so plz give me som cc and advise on how to make it better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.arena111.dk/evanescence/index.html

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Peach // Zakors \\

Sir Krohan- 138 - 2696 (2886)

 

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Attack 112/120 || Strength 112/120 || Defence 112/120 || HP 114/120
Ranged 110/120 || Magic 104/120 || Prayer 103/120 || Slayer 114/120

All Skills 10127/27 || All Skills 102+ 25/27 || All skills 103+ 24/27
All Skills 10420/27 || All Skills 10513/27 || All skills 10611/27


 

288th to reach 85 Slayer & 144th to reach 90 Slayer

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Ok, for a start. Keep your fonts consistent. Black Times new Roman is NOT a good font to use on your site. Try and stick with the white Arial like the rest, or perhaps a greyish blue to diferentiate between a link and regular text.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Take the crappy ascii mosher out of the title ",,!,,(-.-),,!,," looks really lame

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The thumbnails are good but the popup code you have used it commonly used by spam popups so are blocked by most popup blocking software including google toolbar and firefox. Read up here

 

 

 

Same thing with the lyrics page, popup code is blocked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make your own image for each page. Instead of having it in plain text make a mini picture. You could also do this for the menu on the left hand side to make it look a bit more professional. You can get the fontfrom this site

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also you should be using CSS to set the colours and font styles of all your text.

 

 

 

Blah

 

 

 

It a bad way of doing it all. Read up on how CSS can be used to set up fonts on google.

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Step 0: Start editing the html yourself, instead of using WYSIWYG programs. This is how you learn to webdesign, not by having a dumb program do it all for you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Step 0.5: Make sure your html validates

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Step 1: Don't use tables for your layout. Use

's instead, and position them using css. Tables are elements designed for use with tabular data - not to base a design on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Step 2: Do something to make the background or the text lighter - black text on a dark blue background is very hard to read. While we're at it, using more original fonts wouldn't hurt you. Furthermore, don't use a huge background image. This hurts anybody on a poor connection - you should use a html background color and just the small logo at the top, preferably with an alt attribute and inside

tags, to show that this is the subject of your page.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Step 3: Get rid of the silly ascii art in the title. It looks weird.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Step 4: Get rid of all the tags and start using CSS, like someone who knows what they're doing. is evil.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Then there's the matter that this should probably be in T&C. Oh well.

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Other than what Matt and Hannibal said:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. Thread the photos to like 10 to a page or something.

 

 

 

2. Make headings and whatnot stand out more.

 

 

 

3. And the header makes the rest of the site look a bit dull. Lift up the rest of the site to the same level and it should be good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's probably about it. Didn't take a good look at it.

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Well guys thx for your coments so far, yea I know I need to work on my site, but as i said its my first, and im just begining to learn about css/htlm/php but I will work on my site as soon as I get time, but I will try to learn as much as I can about the stuff that I need to remake (what you guys said) but I will bump this thread when I have updated my site...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(I still need to learn about a lot of stuff about web sites)

Sir Krohan- 138 - 2696 (2886)

 

Goals


Attack 112/120 || Strength 112/120 || Defence 112/120 || HP 114/120
Ranged 110/120 || Magic 104/120 || Prayer 103/120 || Slayer 114/120

All Skills 10127/27 || All Skills 102+ 25/27 || All skills 103+ 24/27
All Skills 10420/27 || All Skills 10513/27 || All skills 10611/27


 

288th to reach 85 Slayer & 144th to reach 90 Slayer

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