Suggestions and ratings please.

very scary, theres still a lot u'll have to pick up to achieve a 'great' pixel sig but your definately producing some good stuff.. Though im a lil concerned why your characters are all chest and no legs :lol: , well I like it a lot so ill give it a 6/10.. keep it up :D

lol not bad better than ur current 1 lol.

The perspective is a little messed up, try making your shading and highlighting stand out a bit more. At the moment you can barely see it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, looks like you're improving upon your current sig. Keep up the good work.

allright where should i start..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well you anatonmy is left something to be desired per example; shoulders dont stick out like that, thats not a human build on his torso..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(sorry for the rushyness i only spend 20 minutes on this..)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the character on the left represents what a cartoony+realisme mix male character should look like in a basic form, which i believe is a style your trying to get at. (per example MxM uses this style whether he knows it or not)

 

 

 

the character on the left.. lets call him Bill, Bill shows the basic outlines and the stick figure in him.. if you look not so closely you can see he has a stick figure in him (as does.. Jim? on the right) which kind of shows how he is made.

 

 

 

now to me your current goal is to practice stick figures like that to an extent to getting the proportions right nearly every time you make it.

 

 

 

now you can try and follow Jim's or Bill's stickfigure and see where you get .. Jim is easyer tho i left his arms a bit short.. then again he still needs hands.

 

 

 

i relocated the lava river to the back.. in case the characters might break out a sweat.. and it just didnt look right.

 

 

 

now the red-tree-shaped-stick-figured-figures (i like that word) show what the trees should be in the back ( depth)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now theres a sword on the right.. and dont be mad at me.. i just wanted to draw a sword.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

theres more.. tho ill save that for future days

 

 

 

however you can use it as an example of how swords look like because i dont anyone can be cut down by those swords you drew.. heavy spells the name.

Thanks for the lesson. (I got a private tutor :lol: )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, I'm using thew new one as my sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Old One:

i give it a 34/67.3

extremely well put Quer :D , I think you should start something pixel related again cus Ive not seen much of your work in a while.. As you know a lot about how people can improve I can't see any reason why you can't become much better very quickly :lol: . This is the last of your work ive seen, seems a while agoo :? . only a wip tho.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well I agree 100% with what Quer said, and I gotta add, its always nice when people spend their free time helping and advicing others.. you so kind Quer :D .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter

extremely well put Quer :D , I think you should start something pixel related again cus Ive not seen much of your work in a while.. As you know a lot about how people can improve I can't see any reason why you can't become much better very quickly :lol: . This is the last of your work ive seen, seems a while agoo :? . only a wip tho.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well I agree 100% with what Quer said, and I gotta add, its always nice when people spend their free time helping and advicing others.. you so kind Quer :D .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

stop it your making me blush :lol:

 

 

 

uhm thanks :D i guess i can get back to work again..