Thoughts?

It looks like a bunch of MS paint scribbles because it is. It's bad. I'm trying to think of some kind C/C so I'm not just spewing insults, but I'm having trouble. Make the black lines look less like scribbles maybe? And make them white? Cut off the strange orange border, and make the text ligible, if I didn't know the brand name I wouldn't be able to read it. Honestly the effort required to make this into something that could be considered worth a thread could be better spent on an actual project, rather then a doodle.

It looks like a bunch of MS paint scribbles because it is. It's bad. I'm trying to think of some kind C/C so I'm not just spewing insults, but I'm having trouble. Make the black lines look less like scribbles maybe? And make them white? Cut off the strange orange border, and make the text ligible, if I didn't know the brand name I wouldn't be able to read it. Honestly the effort required to make this into something that could be considered worth a thread could be better spent on an actual project, rather then a doodle.

 

 

 

Good job on huge condescending C/C and criticism.

 

This is the style I aimed for in this particular creation.

Don't just play the "it's my style" card when someone criticises your work. Fact is, this is bad. I like the shading of the waves with the different blues, but the outlines with the black and white just looks awful, it's barely legible.

I think this piece has a lot of potential to be great, but you should to consider;

 

 

 

-The thickness of the black lines - I can see what you've tried to do but they're a little too thick for my liking. You should also change the colours to white to make it look more natural, because it look akin to a oil spill right now :P

 

 

 

-Shading: It looks nice, but it does detract some attention from the surfboard as it does seem a little too emphasised. Try using a more subtle colour scheme that pleases the eye more and doesn't distract. Perhaps less saturation would add to the aesthetics?

 

 

 

Sorry about my previous criticism, if it did seem a little harsh.

Fair enough.