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Mai characters lovable?


fenrir321

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After the decision for yet another dump and slump (dump the whole story and slump over the paper, writing from scratch/tweaking majorly), I decided to write the following. It is 4 full-length Word pages. I just want to know if I made the characters likeable or not. Whether or not they're fleshed out yet is unimportant to me at this point.

 

All who read get a free e-cookie. :thumbsup:

 

All who read and post something constructive get a free e-cookie and a free e-waffle

 

All who read and then post that they want a cookie with no feedback get an e-mushroom -.-

 

 

 

FFS, it had tabs where I pasted it. Oh well, I don't want to hurt my readers' eyes D:.

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